Smart phone

Poem written by Setu on Sunday 10, November 2019

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Today's reality

Overall Rating: 86%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 86% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:90%
Imagery:90%
Spelling & Grammar:100%
Flow/Rhythm:70%
Vocabulary:80%
What a wonderful invention it is, You can carry it anywhere with ease. It can set an alarm for you to wake up, It can also book a cab. It has an incredible memory, So it can remember all phone numbers with out you to worry. You can learn any fact or fiction, You also can just have fun or correct your diction. News updates, social media,apps and game, Misuse or overuse of technology? Who is to blame ؟ Do anything at the speed of a rocket , As the whole world is in your pocket.
   

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    I loved the last two sentences, "Do anything at the speed of a rocket, as the whole world is in your pocket." A true statement indeed. Also a scary idea to rely on such a small device.

    Maybe a little editing in the poem. The word game would flow better as games. There should also be a space at "social media, apps, and game." The sentence, "You also can just have fun or correct your diction." Could be edited with a better flow.

    Thank you for posting this! A great subject indeed. Smile
    1. So it can remember all phone numbers with out you to worry.

    2. Misuse or overuse of technology?
    Who is to blame ?

    1. This sentence is too jumbled.

    2. This doesn't fit with your "purpose."
    Don's getting hardassed. Smile

    Anyhow, I enjoyed it. I thought it was a quite accurate summing-up of the technology.

    In my humble opinion, I think we use it too much.