That Thing

Poem written by Madhatter on Friday 8, November 2019

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Who knew I would have to say... me too.

Overall Rating: 90.36%

This writing has been rated by 5 members, resulting in a rating of 90.36% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:85.4%
Imagery:90.2%
Spelling & Grammar:98.6%
Flow/Rhythm:85%
Vocabulary:92.6%
It happened... that thing I only hear about. the feeling... the uncomfortable feeling. that moment, when a gaze becomes a violation. It happened... that thing I only hear about. The moment a calm demeanor becomes a quicksand of wanting to hide When the body cringes and consciously yearns to cover itself It happened... that thing I only hear about. The invasion of comfort the tearing down of respect. the understanding of fear to "speak up." The connection to feeling wrong for allowing this moment... these moments, to affect this strong, fragile mind. It happened... that thing I only hear about.
   

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    #1

    kt6550kt6550

    Well, welcome back. Good to have you here again.

    And you come back quite well, indeed. A lovely submission.
    Commented 08/11/2019 22:58
    #2

    MadhatterMadhatter

    Thank you KT, now that I have an adequate device, I hope I get in the flow of writing again. Smile
    Commented 10/11/2019 15:39
    #3

    DarkfireDarkfire

    Nice imagery and wording. Welcome back!
    Commented 10/11/2019 20:08
    #4

    MadhatterMadhatter

    Thank you Darkfire, Im excited to be back Smile
    Commented 12/11/2019 03:09
    #5

    Don RobleDon Roble

    I was so disgusted by the rating some ass gave you I forgot to commnet. This was a great piece of writing. It talks about what we all feel and never say.
    It was an very quiet writing that added to its quality.
    Commented 13/11/2019 00:03
    #6

    MadhatterMadhatter

    Thanks Don, I appreciate the feedback! You are one of the honest reviewers on this site. Smile
    Commented 14/11/2019 03:18