That Thing

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Who knew I would have to say... me too.This writing has been rated by 5 members, resulting in a rating of 90.36% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
Concept/Plot: | 85.4% |
Imagery: | 90.2% |
Spelling & Grammar: | 98.6% |
Flow/Rhythm: | 85% |
Vocabulary: | 92.6% |
It happened...
that thing I only hear about.
the feeling...
the uncomfortable feeling.
that moment, when a gaze becomes a violation.
It happened...
that thing I only hear about.
The moment a calm demeanor becomes
a quicksand of wanting to hide
When the body cringes and consciously yearns to cover itself
It happened...
that thing I only hear about.
The invasion of comfort
the tearing down of respect.
the understanding of fear to "speak up."
The connection to feeling wrong for allowing this moment...
these moments, to affect this strong, fragile mind.
It happened...
that thing I only hear about.
And you come back quite well, indeed. A lovely submission.
It was an very quiet writing that added to its quality.