Fireflies (Tanka)

Tanka written by AJW708 on Thursday 17, October 2019

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Tanka: 5-7-5-7-7

Overall Rating: 94.4%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 94.4% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:94%
Imagery:95%
Spelling & Grammar:95%
Flow/Rhythm:94%
Vocabulary:94%
Fireflies everywhere Brings me nothing but pure joy While running around Trying to get one of them Caught lightning in a bottle
   

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    You have a gift with these Japanese forms of poetry! Wonderful!
    Thanks for the complement. I am glad you enjoy my poems.