What am I? (Part I)

Poem written by AJW708 on Thursday 26, September 2019

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An acrostic poem that describes myself.

Overall Rating: 63.2%

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Concept/Plot:85%
Imagery:25%
Spelling & Grammar:20%
Flow/Rhythm:86%
Vocabulary:100%
Loving in nature Odd sometimes Nice most of the time Eccentric to some Loyal to many Youthful outlook
   

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    The first two lines make no sense.
    I kind of like this, it just seems to be a bit short.
    As for the first two lines, they are different, they sort of draw you in.
    I don't like writing long phrases for acrostic poems. I like to keep them short and simple.