This is my second short story. Please criticise it, I want to learn from it :D (excuse my English, I'm not a native speaker)
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"Fuck," cursed Leon.
Lloyd was silent. Mila tried to post her "beautiful panoramic photo" on instagram. Alicia looked bored around the forest.
Their trip would have been a nice walk in the woods, but apparently the four friends were not as good in navigation as they thought. "Shouldn't we have arrived at the campsite by now?" asked Lloyd without much interest. "Yes", answered Leon annoyed. "Oops, and what now?", Mila stammered, who was suddenly very worried, "My phone is out of reach here." Her worrying was touching.
"Gee, what are we supposed to do?" said Lloyd as if there was no answer to his question.
Alicia was still silent and now looked at him. She took a deep breath. "You may find this a strange idea, but I don't see a problem in spending the night here"
Alicia has always been the adventurous type. Lloyd found it quite frightening at times but also admirable. Mila needed some time to process Alicia's statement: "What? In the middle of the forest? "A smile appeared on Lloyd's mouth. "And why not? We have sleeping bags and some food, "argued Alicia. "It's not like that there are bears or wolves here in Belgium," said Lloyd. He supported Alicia. Leon nodded in agreement, but a bit against his will. Mila chuckled a little, "OK, but I sleep close to you guys."
Lloyd took off his hat and rubbed his tangled black hair for a moment. The sleeping bags were already spread out on the ground, but he didn't feel like sleeping. He was sitting against a tree. It started to drip lightly.
Mila and Leon were already napping, close to each other. "Just a little bit and it's that time again", thought Lloyd. The two had been very close for a while.
Lloyd had also been thinking of someone for a while. Was it love? He didnt't know, he was still too young and too stupid he thought by himself.
That person suddenly was sitting next to him. Alicia was trying to settle comfortably against the tree.
They didn't look at each other, it wasn't necessary. Lloyd knew exactly what she looked like. Green eyes, almost white hair and the most handsome face he had ever seen.
They didn't say anything to each other. They didn't had to. Lloyd knew exactly how she was inside.
He looked at her. A smile appeared on her face.
She put her head on his shoulder.
It remained silent. Only the rain was heard.
They didn't say anything to each other. The silence was more meaningful than anything they could say.
Lloyd put his arm around her shoulder and supported his head against hers.
It remained silent. They felt each other's warmth.
They felt each other's feelings, and for a moment it was one of the most beautiful moments of their lives.
The drip stopped.