The World I Seek

Poem written by Lonelyhearts1224 on Thursday 28, February 2019

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A world of purity and kindness

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Let's build a world, where love is crowned; With truth and justice we stand our ground. A world where honesty defeys evil; In this world all are pure and civil. Where pious men devote their lives, to see God's will not cast aside. World children's laughters make Angels sing; God's Intervention their chants thus bring. A mother's nurturing would cause rejoice; And all Saints weep for departing souls. Let's make a world, which peace and glory would supercede all wealthy ownings. Where faith and mercy ted helping hands; and we all praise this wonderous land. All of earth's nations would compromise; embracing our differences and never fight. Let's built this perfect world I seek; Could start with you, or end with me. written: December 24, 2016
   

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    I really enjoy this. Other than some spelling errors this is very well written. A strong ending.
    Very nice. Just my opinion, but I think it could use a bit more punctuation.