Let me in

Poem written by HatchJ2000 on Monday 25, February 2019

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Poem inspired by the song: "Get on the Road"

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See me Hear what I say. Those three delicate words mean too much to throw away. And I'm far too weak to express to you, how you make me fly. How you make me blush. Whisper in my ear, take my breath. I can't wait much longer for you to save me. It knocks me down that grin on your lips. You're for me, and I for you. Take my hand and my heart, softly you ask, If I can be yours, and you, mine. Finally

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    This is nice. Has just enough rhythm. Though I would add a comma at the end of you first line to add a pause.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Very sweet. I enjoyed.