I'm naturally drunk from the petty illnesses I've been havi

Poem written by Saad El-Asha on Monday 18, February 2019

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I'm naturally drunk from the petty illnesses I've been having. My hangovers allow me to reminisce what I've been losing: the spirit has left my tongue, my genitals, my reading eyes… It's bad genes! I say, They have kept me company for years. I might as well honour them and leave them be, as they personify my way downhill, where no hangovers reminisce.
   

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    lol However, I disagree. I think when you get to the bottom of the hill, you are fully hung over.