Poem written by HatchJ2000 on Monday 11, February 2019

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Short poem, quick read.

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Why can't I die? Why can't I find peace? What did I do wrong? Who did I betray? How do I stand this? What am I hoping for in this hopeless life?

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    Things certainly seem less hopeless when you can write things out.
    I hope the author finds some of these answers.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Man, Hatch, what a downer! Not my idea of a poem (which means it's probably a good modern poem), more like the aftermath of a night's binge following a very bad month. Hope thing are looking up for your narrator.
    A sad poem. Nicely done.