On vision

Poem written by Greg on Thursday 7, February 2019

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Yesterday, I pondered the path I would walk today It occurs, now, I ought not concern so for the future, As I happened, then, upon a patch of wild Larkspur I had not considered these wonders which bring us to pause along our way

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    Nearly a poem, Greg. Even one rhyme! Neat little -- whatever it is. I enjoyed it, and the subtle lesson of its important message.

    Just one nit: unless you are e.e. cummings incognito, the pronoun "I" should always be capitalized.
    I swear, the shorter the verse the more I miss obvious punctuation typos.
    Good catch, Alex.
    Very nice. Sort of along the same line as "The Return."