To those capable of loving...

Poem written by Saad El-Asha on Sunday 6, January 2019

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To those capable of loving, Each one loves in different ways; I show my love to meine Mutter in a way, I show my love to mon amie in another. That's why I hate this land, ever since I was a child, I have hated it. It's a noble kind of hate, reflecting the love I have within and without. I would neither "serve" nor "benefit" this land, all I can do is resist, with love, within and without.
   

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    Very nice. I like this. Quite well done.