Hypotonicity

Poem written by borst on Saturday 24, November 2018

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My initial dabbling with poetry composition (very brief)

Overall Rating: 89.6%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 89.6% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:78%
Imagery:100%
Spelling & Grammar:93%
Flow/Rhythm:100%
Vocabulary:77%
A cold epicenter radiates darkness; chilling flames, pale blue melt the heart; sadness escapes the throat.
   

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    Yes, it is very brief. Are you describing a black hole?
    Enjoyed the Poem. The imagery is really good. Please submit some more!