Self Destruction

Poem written by Manuelde on Thursday 22, November 2018

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The abandonment I face from you is damning and my own demise. Abusing you, hurling insults at you and all the while pleading with you, internally, that you won't let me lose you. I'll hope you'll understand the pain, the longing that's inside me, even though I only emanate hate to you. I am stuck in this duality it plagues my life. Trapped in my own head, I can't wretch out my feelings, the truth. I only vomit insults, bleed hate, while my tender soul throbs inside me wondering why I put myself and you through this anguish.

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    Welcome, Manuelde. My standard poetry disclaimer: I'm rather old fashioned when it comes to poetry: I actually favor Poe, Marvel, Coleridge, Wilde, and the Roberts Frost and Service, to give you some idea. To me, even free verse should have a flow and rhythm when read aloud to distinguish it from spoken prose. When reading a poem, you should almost hear the music that would make it a song. Technically this is well done, considering that punctuation in "poetry" is erratic at best. That said, I'm not sure what the hell to call this. The only thing I'm certain of is that this is one sick puppy. If it's autobigraphical, please see somebody. Soon. If not, you have a very disturbed mind -- and I expect great things from you if you apply it to creative fiction, as in stories. Looking forward to something from the crypt. Write on.
    Very sad and tragic. I hope it is not autobiographical.