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Poem written by Saad El-Asha on Wednesday 21, November 2018

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Plankin' before liftin'? Squattin' before balling? Bodybuilding confidential. Thrown roses on the stage; The road to oblivion: Porajmos! Live your poem, squatter.

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kt6550

lol. And to hell with working out!

Commented 26/11/2018 22:48

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kt6550

8 days ago

Welcome, borst. Please post and read others' works as well. I hope you enjoy working with us.

Lonelyhearts1224

9 days ago

Saad, just click on picture icon, start writing your message then click on send that should do it!

borst

12 days ago

Mike L B, AlexScribe, kt6550, thank you all for the feedback/construct
ive criticism you've provided me so far. Glad I found this site.

kt6550

13 days ago

Hello Noeyrocks!

Noeyrocks

13 days ago

Just wanted to say hello!

Mike L B

22 days ago

Thanks Alex for feedback. Will make noted changes.

Mike L B

22 days ago

Thanks kt6500. Will make change to "wept." Re: "Kerfuffle"--I checked etymology of word and it dates back to 16 th Century Scottish origins as "curfuffle." Word used

Mike L B

1 month ago

Thanks KT6500. Definitely too long. I'm presently contemplating breaking up most of my chapters. Yes, "Gallimaufry" is a strange word not used very often. Appreciate your views.

AlexScribe

1 month ago

No worry, Don. If it were truthful, your wife would probably kill you. Glad to see anything from you -- even a shout.

Don Roble

1 month ago

If I wrote a memoir of my childhood I'd have to go into Witness Protection.

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