Poem written by EthanRMingay on Saturday 29, September 2018

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A lunch break ponder - written in rhymes.

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All day long I hear them say: "I need a holiday, a week away!" But I just want my own free space. Perhaps a thunderstorm to change the pace. Some time alone to watch the rain. Just me, my mind and I’m okay.

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    Ethan, OK, so this is a poem! Rhyme, rhythm, and a poetic topic: that makes a poem in my book. Only nit: the 4th line doesn't read as smoothly as the others, but a little discord may be all right. Good job. Write on.
    lol A lot of fun!
    Simple and containing truth.
    A nice piece.
    Thank you for sharing.