Cascading Water

Poem written by Lonelyhearts1224 on Monday 6, August 2018

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The healing effects that water can have

Overall Rating: 86.4%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 86.4% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:90%
Imagery:91%
Spelling & Grammar:86%
Flow/Rhythm:76%
Vocabulary:89%
cascading water pristine and blue rid me from stains the day's produce Quick, quench the thirst that sears my throat and heal the wounds my body hauls Disguise the tears that drench my face Soothe aching muscles, my strength, replace Defuse the worries that plague my mind Magical spray refreshes souls, divine Reviving energy comes down the spout welcoming, comforting its warmth, its sound Once you're well done with all my requests, cleanse dreadful dreams so I may rest written on: January 16, 2018
   

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    Technically similar to your earlier poems, Lonely, but the subject is less interesting to me.
    I still don't like the large spaces between lines. Cool

    Oh, and water is also good for flushing the kidneys.