Cascading Water

Poem written by Lonelyhearts1224 on Monday 6, August 2018

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The healing effects that water can have

Overall Rating: 86.4%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 86.4% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:90%
Imagery:91%
Spelling & Grammar:86%
Flow/Rhythm:76%
Vocabulary:89%
cascading water, pristine and blue, rid me from stains the day's produce. Quick, quench the thirst that sears my throat; and heal the wounds my body hauls. Disguise the tears that drench my face; Soothe aching muscles; my strength, replace. Defuse the worries that plague my mind. Magical spray refreshes souls, divine. Reviving energy comes down the spout; welcoming, comforting its warmth, its sound. Once you're well done with all my requests; cleanse dreadful dreams so I may rest. written on: January 16, 2018
   

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    Technically similar to your earlier poems, Lonely, but the subject is less interesting to me.
    I still don't like the large spaces between lines. Cool

    Oh, and water is also good for flushing the kidneys.