Bee Lessions

Haiku written by AlexScribe on Monday 23, July 2018

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Insight from bees on one paradox of life (Inspired by kt6550's 'Very Poor Christmases')

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Queens have long life and drones enjoy indolence, yet only workers dance.
   

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    Very good haiku. And I am glad my writing has inspired something!
    KT, you have no idea all that you have inspired.
    This is an outstanding poem and I loved the last line. Made me smile.