Prison

Poem written by Eyeshield21 on Wednesday 13, June 2018

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History is written by the winners And we are the prisoners, Prisoners of their fakeness Until this world ends. But what if someone out there Would help us, a rebel, A rebel who would save us From ourselves.
   

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    You make a good point with this. For me, it is just a bit short.
    Because it is so short and you "jump" from the part of the winners to the rebel that should safe us made me believe that we are the winners in the first part that create the "fakeness" ourself. That we only Let ourself believe that we won.

    What I like to be honest. But if that was not meant to be, a little bridge between the 2 parts would have been a good choice in my opinion.

    Overal well done
    Thank you for your opinion!