Jareth

Limerick written by Mythbhavd on Wednesday 13, December 2006

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I was picking on a kid in class today who loves to write poetry and stories (good ones)... and he talks...A LOT! This was just a quick limerick made up on the spot.

Overall Rating: 92.4%

This writing has been rated by 4 members, resulting in a rating of 92.4% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:89.75%
Imagery:89.75%
Spelling & Grammar:97.5%
Flow/Rhythm:95%
Vocabulary:90%
There once was a boy named Jareth Who lived in Waynesboro Parish He talked all the time In Rhythm and Rhyme And his writings were always quite garish.
   

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    #1

    RouthRouth

    Nicely done, basic yet good rhythm and flow. Not bad for being made up on the spot.
    Commented 13/12/2006 18:24
    #2

    SarielSariel

    I agree. Very nice for on the spot work
    Commented 16/12/2006 19:17
    #3

    JakeJake

    Nice work, but Jareth and Parish? savage_cushions would never approve.
    Commented 18/12/2006 06:43
    #4

    savage_cushionssavage_cushions

    You read my mind Tsyni ! However, yes, it flows beautifully
    Commented 20/12/2006 15:33
    #5

    JarethJareth

    I'd have to say... good job! But you can expect me to write something about you in the future!Smile
    Commented 10/05/2007 21:35