Arrogantly

Description
A short poem about arroganceThis writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 97.7% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
Concept/Plot: | 100% |
Imagery: | 100% |
Spelling & Grammar: | 92.5% |
Flow/Rhythm: | 98% |
Vocabulary: | 98% |
Shortly,
For the sake of beauty,
I brush blush patiently
For the head of glory,
I slander others secretly
For the emblem of religiosity,
I questioned the fidelity
And I just don't get it rightly,
When people shout at me
I just took it wrongly,
Blaming the reality,
For the end of remedy
Shortly,
That's all me,
Till I cried silently
Nice work there!
I'm glad the results are satisfactory, it took quite a lot of time to put the right rhymes.
What do u think about the content?
Thanks. Anyway, what do u think about the diction? Any issues?
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well, later when I write others poetry maybe I was not so much emphasis on the rhyme.
what do you mean about religiosity.? Hehhe
@nurwanti
Anyway, the meaning is sentimentally religious.