@Meesafiktri
yep, this is haiku, a very short form of Japanese poetry. As we know haiku consist of 17 morae on -- often translated as "syllables", in three phrases of 5, 7, and 5 on respectively.
@Saw233
thank you! did you imagine something after read that haiku?
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This might a short poetry which consists of 17 moraes (known as syllables, but we couldn't translate it to it), but I tried to show to you the imagination behind the words that stated above.
As haiku has the features of: -It contains three lines.
- It has five moras (syllables) in the first line, seven in the second and five in the last line.
- It contains 17 syllables in total.
- A Haiku poem does not rhyme.
- Haiku poems frequently have a kigo or seasonal reference.
-Haiku poems are usually about nature or natural phenomenon.
-The poem has two juxtaposed subjects that are divided into two contrasting parts.
- In English, this division between two parts can be shown by a colon or dash. http://literarydevices.net/haiku/
I'm trying to make it as I could although this is my first time write this kind of poetry. Hope this poetry could give you such a visualization that I intended to say
I'll have to delete the account for you anyhow as this version of the site is old and that was never added. No writings on that account, but 3 comments, which I can reattribute.
But it's okay, it's good poem.
yep, this is haiku, a very short form of Japanese poetry. As we know haiku consist of 17 morae on -- often translated as "syllables", in three phrases of 5, 7, and 5 on respectively.
thank you! did you imagine something after read that haiku?
--
This might a short poetry which consists of 17 moraes (known as syllables, but we couldn't translate it to it), but I tried to show to you the imagination behind the words that stated above.
As haiku has the features of:
-It contains three lines.
- It has five moras (syllables) in the first line, seven in the second and five in the last line.
- It contains 17 syllables in total.
- A Haiku poem does not rhyme.
- Haiku poems frequently have a kigo or seasonal reference.
-Haiku poems are usually about nature or natural phenomenon.
-The poem has two juxtaposed subjects that are divided into two contrasting parts.
- In English, this division between two parts can be shown by a colon or dash.
http://literarydevices.net/haiku/
I'm trying to make it as I could although this is my first time write this kind of poetry. Hope this poetry could give you such a visualization that I intended to say
thanks! Also, you could express what you feel after read this through this comment column. I'll wait