Carelessness

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I dedicate this poem to him; which was one my boy.This writing has been rated by 3 members, resulting in a rating of 91.066666666667% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
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We were careless people, You and I
You smashed up things and people
and then retreated back into their love
and their vast carelessness.
But not even a single one of the sparkling hundreds that enjoyed your game
and for me..
not even a flower.
Then, why continue to say no more?
Because I was all he had
The only one who cared.
In my opinion it would be better if you don't use capital letter. It's just my opinion
@meesafiktrih
Well what do u think about the diction?