Stand by me

Poem written by Nurwanti on Sunday 4, December 2016

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This is my first poem. Through this poem I try to present a poem that can be read from top to bottom (the first verse to the last) and also from bottom to top (the last verse to the first). and this is it ... Hope you enjoy it

Overall Rating: 92.2%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 92.2% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:100%
Imagery:74%
Spelling & Grammar:100%
Flow/Rhythm:96.5%
Vocabulary:90.5%
Don't Go? Give a minute Show how much its worth Give time to fix all the errors and wait Show how hard its work Give a chance Let It go?
   

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    #11

    YuanputraYuanputra

    Its an awesome idea. Can u see.?
    The poem can read from top to bottom and bottom to top. Alll have the same meaning.
    @nurwanti

    Commented 10/12/2016 01:50
    #12

    NurwantiNurwanti

    Thanks @yuanputra
    ,
    That's actually what I want to deliver.
    You got it rightly.
    Commented 20/12/2016 12:20