My Story

Poem written by arumgumelar on Saturday 3, December %15

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Short story about my story

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My story You don't know me Unless you know my story Me is more than an identity Me is more than this body Like a chronicle It is full of stories that unpredictable Not only about the struggle Sometimes also surprising miracle Everyone writes their own destiny Everyone deserves to get their own remedy All I notice that those who keep their pace steady The rest will be written in history
   

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  • Everyone has their own story. I couldn't be more agree with that. Nice work!
    - December 03 2016 15:41:23
    • I like the rhymes...
      well done
      - December 04 2016 15:24:31
      • Thank you for the compliments you both give
        - December 10 2016 14:50:20