Despair

Poem written by stmufarrohah on Saturday 3, December 2016

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Dear, no one You asked me: "How's my feeling?" We sat in silence awaiting my answer. You smiled, said that it's just about the time. You were right. I had waited in vain, and I need to do that once again. I should thank to you for teaching me that true happiness is the world's greatest lie.
   

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    this reminds me of bob marley's waiting in vain lol keep the good work!
    @hviturhiminn
    haha and you just poke me to search the lyric of that song, lol, poor me just didn't know about that song Shock

    So, I conclude that you think this this poem is about waiting the lovers one. Actually, I did not expect about the theme of love story. I just want to pointing out about "doing something useless".
    It was stated at the first line Dear, no one, the subject "I" in here was talking to nobody, means he/she was talking with her/himself.
    I hope the readers could feel the pathetic emotion.
    However, I created the subject as the one who was hopeless after trying to fight the life.
    cited:
    it's just about the time.
    You were right.
    I had waited in vain,

    This is similar with people nowadays, they often being weak but still try to pass it through.

    Finally, i chose an unpleasant ending cause I think it is not everybody is strong one and another. I want to expose the one who are alone and being desperately. In fact, people used to disregard to see the ones that need a help like the subject "I" in this poem. That's my biggest hope for the readers to be more sensitive with others.