Teardrops In The Champagne
DescriptionThis is a sad rhyme about remembering the passing of a loved one.
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Teardrops In The Champagne Our place that we first met, Has closed and is no more. I enter what is left of it, Stepping through its shattered door. As I gaze upon the dust covered tables, And the paint peeling off the walls. I remember the day you proposed to me, And other memories that recalls. Now here I stand in the darkened gloom; I know not what to do. Those feelings of sorrow within this old heart, My love, I so miss you. Out of a window, I look and gaze, To watch the pouring rain. I lift a glass in my wrinkled hand Sending teardrops in the Champagne.