Sister

Poem written by KNOX on Wednesday 25, December 2002

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Its quiet and its breezy as i sit in front of a grave, i stare at the markings and i look at the name. Then my throat gets choked up and my eyes cannot see. For the tears that are in them are blinding me i can sit here for hours and not make a sound i keep staring aty the name and the flowers in the ground there's nothing i can say there's nothing i can do but Kelly how i wish this wasnt you! My eyes are filled with water as i stand and walk away oh what an awful place for Kelly to have to stay.
   

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    A deeply felted poem, Knox, well done. Just a few misspelled words, good job