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my attempt at one..This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 98.1% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
Concept/Plot: | 96.5% |
Imagery: | 96.5% |
Spelling & Grammar: | 99% |
Flow/Rhythm: | 100% |
Vocabulary: | 98.5% |
The open book lay
Revealing clouded sadness
Of lost ambition
I like it. It's the way I write stories.