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Haiku written by Madhatter on Saturday 7, February 2015

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my attempt at one..

Overall Rating: 98.1%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 98.1% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:96.5%
Imagery:96.5%
Spelling & Grammar:99%
Flow/Rhythm:100%
Vocabulary:98.5%
The open book lay Revealing clouded sadness Of lost ambition
   

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    #1

    DarkfireDarkfire

    Short and powerful. I see a blank or unfinished book.
    Commented 07/02/2015 19:12
    #2

    Don RobleDon Roble

    Haiku- I don't know what this means.
    I like it. It's the way I write stories.
    Commented 08/02/2015 10:55
    #3

    kt6550kt6550

    Excellent haiku.
    Commented 09/02/2015 11:52
    #4

    astarteastarte

    Very good!
    Commented 14/02/2015 17:24
    #5

    pirate60pirate60

    I seemed to have missed the lines before so deleted my dumb sounding comments. Upon reading it I agree with Darkfire. A book one wants to write but hasn't been able to start or is unsure what to write.
    Commented 15/02/2015 11:33