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Haiku written by Madhatter on Saturday 7, February 2015

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my attempt at one..

Overall Rating: 98.1%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 98.1% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:96.5%
Imagery:96.5%
Spelling & Grammar:99%
Flow/Rhythm:100%
Vocabulary:98.5%
The open book lay Revealing clouded sadness Of lost ambition
   

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    Short and powerful. I see a blank or unfinished book.
    Haiku- I don't know what this means.
    I like it. It's the way I write stories.
    Excellent haiku.
    Very good!
    I seemed to have missed the lines before so deleted my dumb sounding comments. Upon reading it I agree with Darkfire. A book one wants to write but hasn't been able to start or is unsure what to write.