Me and you, Lisa and Sue
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Me and you, Lisa and Sue You and me, sitting in a tree, eating an apple or two. We tossed both the cores, wishing we had a few more while wondering what next to do. We both looked down for we heard a sound and there walked Lisa and Sue. Our eyes popped out, for there was no doubt, these two sisters were the cutest two. You turned to me, and I could see, a big grin upon your face. As I well knew you, and that you liked Sue, I hoped she didn't carry mace. So by-and- by, with a heavy sigh, I watched you drop to Earth. On your knees you looked up, like a brown eyed pup, and smiled for all your worth. Now it may be a sin, but I had to grin, for I saw the look she gave you. If you played your cards right, this could be your night, to share a kiss or two. I looked to Sue's right, and to my delight, saw Lisa smiling at me. So down I to went, as if Heaven sent, to see what I would see. I made a bold choice, and in a meek voice, asked Lisa to go for a walk. We did just that, and then later we sat, and no it was not to talk.