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Me and you, Lisa and Sue
You and me, sitting in a tree, eating an apple or two.
We tossed both the cores, wishing we had a few more while wondering what next to do.
We both looked down for we heard a sound and there walked Lisa and Sue.
Our eyes popped out, for there was no doubt, these two sisters were the cutest two.
You turned to me, and I could see, a big grin upon your face.
As I well knew you, and that you liked Sue, I hoped she didn't carry mace.
So by-and- by, with a heavy sigh, I watched you drop to Earth.
On your knees you looked up, like a brown eyed pup, and smiled for all your worth.
Now it may be a sin, but I had to grin, for I saw the look she gave you.
If you played your cards right, this could be your night, to share a kiss or two.
I looked to Sue's right, and to my delight, saw Lisa smiling at me.
So down I to went, as if Heaven sent, to see what I would see.
I made a bold choice, and in a meek voice, asked Lisa to go for a walk.
We did just that, and then later we sat, and no it was not to talk.