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Thomas Cat Loo
Have you heard the tale of a rabbit, whose name was Thomas Cat?
You might think this a little strange and I must agree with that.
But Thomas you see was adopted, by a feline named Kitty Loo.
She saw Thomas in a little basket, and knew what she must do.
She took poor Thomas as her son, and watched him as he grew.
She knew one day he'd leave the den, and that had made her blue.
Thomas had known he was different, after all how could he not.
But he had a lot of good friends, one named Iron Pot.
Now Iron Pot he was a tortoise, with a shell as hard as stone.
When he was young, he was very little, but then he had grown and grown.
They hung out with two rabbit friends; one a girl and one a boy.
The boy, his name was Peter, while the girl, was known as Joy.
They called themselves 'The Cool Four' and I'd agree with that.
For cool is what I'd call four friends; two rabbits, a tortoise and a cat.
These friends had a dream to be musicians, and so they formed a band.
They played each night in a meadow field, and I think that's just grand.
Who am I you may ask. Why I am Kitty Loo.
And I couldn't be more proud of my kitten, my boy, my Thomas Loo.