The Band

Poem written by pirate60 on Monday 26, January 2015

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Child's Rhyme

Overall Rating: 94.333333333333%

This writing has been rated by 3 members, resulting in a rating of 94.333333333333% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:90%
Imagery:94.666666666667%
Spelling & Grammar:93.666666666667%
Flow/Rhythm:100%
Vocabulary:93.333333333333%
The Band There's Scat Cat Jack; His fur, black and white. Blowing on his horn, Man he's out of sight. Skeeter's on the skins. Bop'n to a beat. Keep'n us groove'n and isn't that sweeeeat. Over there is Carla. She's the voice of the band. Foxiest fox, up on the grand stand. Of me; I'm Robin. I play the strings. I strum out the cords while Carla sings. We are the band and we love to play. Come dig on our sound and have one kick'n day.
   

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    Oh, yea baby! I just went back in time.
    Really cute, kinda like a song or rap feel.
    lol Thanks Don. It does go back a ways doesn't it.
    MH I'd love to see what you can create tune wise with this or any of my rhymes. Now that would be sweeeeat!
    Blimey, my piratical chum, I feel the need to wear flares and watch Starskey and Hutch.

    I'll bet you were a real 'dude' in that era.

    I loved this.
    LOL Sir K of Osy, I do seem to recall watching said show; mostly for the bitch'n car. A Ford Grand Torino I believe, wasn't it?

    I should point out that this particular rhyme pre-dates the S & H's time by about 15 to 20 years. The beatnick era I believe it was called. check out this characters first TV roll.

    https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=3&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0CC8QFjAC&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.bobdenver.com%2Fdobie-gillis%2F&ei=MHbJVLy6LcLdsASrp4K4Bw&usg=AFQjCNFDcjajJw4bmPFIc7MRloZdUues-Q&sig2=wT14EIouCeeePU3Atemscw&bvm=bv.84607526,d.aWw
    Oh, yeah! Bring on the band!