A Heartfelt Wish

Poem written by Mythbhavd on Wednesday 25, October 2006

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A bedtime wish

Overall Rating: 92.3%

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I long to hear you call my name So softly and so sweet, To turn and find you standing there And suddenly feel complete. So close your eyes and drift to sleep, A smile upon your face, That I may meet you in your dreams And share your warm embrace. -Matthew M. Coiner ©2006
   

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    AeroAero

    Aw, that was really sweet.
    Commented 20/06/2008 04:17