A Heartfelt Wish

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A bedtime wishThis writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 92.3% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
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I long to hear you call my name
So softly and so sweet,
To turn and find you standing there
And suddenly feel complete.
So close your eyes and drift to sleep,
A smile upon your face,
That I may meet you in your dreams
And share your warm embrace.
-Matthew M. Coiner ©2006