Pondering

Poem written by pirate60 on Wednesday 7, January 2015

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child's rhyme

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Pondering It happened upon, a quiet, star filled night, With celestial, galactic and moon bright light. Where thus a top a hilltop high, I contemplated the infinite sky. A question or thought occurred to me; when did this all begin? This vortex of energetic nothingness, these thoughts did bring a grin. Are we of science or religion? Or are we a bit of both? I ponder these philosophical views, with hopes of mental-soul growth. I maybe but a speck in the vastness of space, with a finite amount of time. So what do I do with my moment in life? Why, I sit and write my rhymes.
   

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    #1

    kt6550kt6550

    Very nice, Pirate.
    I will leave you with an excellent observation by the writer Dan Brown: 'Science should concern itself with the answers, religion needs to address the questions.'
    Commented 07/01/2015 23:52
    #2

    pirate60pirate60

    Well said KT, well said. The Da Vinci Code was one of my favorite books; a close second, Angels and Demons.
    Commented 08/01/2015 22:26
    #3

    Don RobleDon Roble

    I don't seem to ever have a problem with science/God Science can't explain what caused the Big Bang and God doesn't need to.
    Short but sweet.
    Commented 10/01/2015 16:22
    #4

    MadhatterMadhatter

    "...This vortex of energetic nothingness" Absolutely love the phrase, wish I would of thought of it. In depth, and then some.
    Commented 15/01/2015 06:17
    #5

    pirate60pirate60

    Smile Thanks MH. Not sure where that line came from... it just did. Hmmm? an energetic line appears out of nothing... How interesting.
    Commented 17/01/2015 20:54