Not so famous last words from nursery rhymes you never knew were said

Poem written by pirate60 on Monday 29, December 2015

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nursery rhyme, funny, one naughty word

Overall Rating: 99%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 99% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

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Not So Famous Last Words From Nursery Rhymes You Never Knew Was Said "Fee-Fi-Fo-Fum!" The giant bellowed loud. Jack heard the angry cry, While descending from the cloud. Down the vine he rushed, With goose and harp in hand. From the sky above, Dashing to the land. The chase was on: Jack leaped to ground, And ran off to the shed. He grabbed his ax and chopped the vine: "Timber!" He said. The vine, it teetered, for just a moment, Then came crashing to the ground. Here came too the giant, To the ground he was bound. Before he splat like a mashed potato, And plunged into the map. Jack heard the giant's un-famous last words, What he yelled? "Oh Crap!" LOL
   

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    #1

    pirate60pirate60

    I wasn't sure if this one and the Christmas one were posted before the crash, so here they are.
    Commented 29/12/2014 20:18
    #2

    Don RobleDon Roble

    Up to your usual standards and my usual expectations.
    Commented 31/12/2014 23:00
    #3

    kt6550kt6550

    Another funny one! Famous last words. Oh, well. Poor Jack. As they say, "Stuff happens."
    Commented 03/01/2015 13:03
    #4

    astarteastarte

    Hahaha! Great as usual, pirate!
    Commented 05/01/2015 19:47
    #5

    pirate60pirate60

    Thanks Don, KT, and Star. So glad it made you chuckle. Always leave'm laughing as the saying goes.
    Commented 07/01/2015 15:49