I can't think of anything

Poem written by Elkie123 on Thursday 7, July 2011

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I wrote this in English...

Overall Rating: 89.6%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 89.6% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:91%
Imagery:91%
Spelling & Grammar:86%
Flow/Rhythm:90%
Vocabulary:90%
Right class, let's write a poem, Miss Carter startes at our faces only knowing, I can not think of anything to write, I stared at my page, nothing, still white. Eek! I feel madly meek. I start to write on my page, Feeling as if I am on centre stage. I am called up to show the class, I very much want to pass. Now I have this masterpiece At the very least! Please comment and rate! Smile
   

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    Funny, and quite original.

    Well done Elkie - but take a look at the spelling mistake in the second line.

    You'll see it.
    Very funny! Good job!