Foggy

Haiku written by flickeringfairy on Saturday 2, July 2011

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8 days of caring for 4 kids, 9 rabbits, 11 chickens, and one big house leaves my brain thinking in Haiku.

Overall Rating: 90%

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Four kids now sleeping, minimal effort applied; much loved peace is here.
   

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    Until again...
    The dreaded roar of infancy,
    calls forth a mighty challenge against
    the pillars of the earth and sky.
    They hunger.
    Or are teething! Who knows???

    But give them food and a chewy toy.
    And tons and tons of love and attention.
    They poop themselves.
    lol Great haiku followed by an excellent comment! Very well done!