Lips

Poem written by flickeringfairy on Tuesday 31, May 2011

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Focused love.

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Your lips, so soft and sweet, Large and luscious, Such a treat. They make me tingle, Make me shout, Make me feel you, Inside and out. So deceiving, How can it be? Attached to you, Kissing me. It seems as though, They should just be As strong and powerful As can be. And yet so tender Are your kisses. They make me shiver, So delicious.
   

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    Lovely!