I have something precious to Me

Poem written by Malicepoint on Friday 13, May 2011

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What's up guys? Oh and hi to all the people who joined since my unscheduled seclusion.

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[left]I have something precious to me, Be it big or small, large or tall, I have something precious to me, It is easily hidden, Yet not something to the least bit forbidden, I have something precious to me, You can hear its beating and wheathered tap, But you can't see to hear this beautifully thing, For I have something precious to me, I can see it, Can you?[/left]
   

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    Nicely done. Good job.