Jig

Joke written by Dnavarre on Wednesday 11, May 2011

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    #1

    kt6550kt6550

    before I was woken by the tapping of fingers on a keyboard. - How about 'awakened' as opposed to 'woken?'

    Pretty good, and I have never seen Saw, or any of the sequels.

    Oh, and I am a MAC user. Pfft
    Commented 14/05/2011 02:18