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Haiku written by the_nev_a_prospect on Sunday 10, April 2011

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Overall Rating: 90%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 90% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

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Imagery:90%
Spelling & Grammar:90%
Flow/Rhythm:90%
Vocabulary:90%
and///////a////////////i've spilled////chalice/////tasted the////////held////////life, cup.//////by ///////////four ///////////hands,
   

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    I must be getting old. I think I am missing something here.
    It's read right to left top-down. Smile
    Very good! And thank you.