You're The One

Poem written by Raven on Monday 18, February 2002

Member Avatar
Description
This writing has not yet had a description added.

Overall Rating: 87%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 87% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:87.5%
Imagery:85%
Spelling & Grammar:87.5%
Flow/Rhythm:87.5%
Vocabulary:87.5%
You're the one that's always there Showing me, you'll always care You always put us in front of you Even when you shouldn't you always do I am sorry for all the hurt and pain Lord knows I've got nothing to gain You give us what we want every time Even if it leaves you with no more than a dime I know sometimes you can't see that I do But please know I'll always love and care for you
   

Post Comment

Please Login to Post a Comment.

Comments

    Nicely done.