Haiku #3

Haiku written by Mythbhavd on Friday 1, September 2006

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Inspired by the rainstorm happening outside.

Overall Rating: 85%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 85% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:85%
Imagery:85%
Spelling & Grammar:85%
Flow/Rhythm:85%
Vocabulary:85%
Brittle grass crackles Parched earth slowly surrenders To the soft fall rain MMC ©2006
   

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    hey mr. coiner...its me sara..



    i really like this