The Time to Die

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As I stand before the gates of hell
I hear the droan of a single bell
It tells the time the gates will open
Never again will my name be spoken
I pass beyond great plillars of flame
My mind struggles to remember your name
With my head in my hands I drop to my knees
Saying "Let me remember please"
As I turn the gates behind me close
I look behind the bars and see a rose
A rose with petals as soft as your face
God please let me out of this place
I hold the rose tight in my hand
Slowly it begins to turn to sand
I look upwards from within this space
I see you standing there crying
I hate what I've done by dying
To forget your soft and gentle touch
God knows I love you so very much
But now it's time for me to part
Time for you to make a new start
But remember this till your dying day
In my heart you'll always stay
The love I gave you will help you see
You will always have a part of me