Autumn

Haiku written by boneyg on Monday 14, February 2011

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Overall Rating: 90%

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The leafs are falling. All around me to the ground. Summer has ended.
   

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    Just a bit short.
    It's a haiku.
    Ooops! My bad! Frown
    hmm... The first haiku I've seen on the site. I like it though Smile
    leaves not Leafs

    Other than that great poem.