The Decision

Romance Story written by Dnavarre on Wednesday 2, February 2011

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Overall Rating: 92.333333333333%

This writing has been rated by 3 members, resulting in a rating of 92.333333333333% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:94.666666666667%
Imagery:91.666666666667%
Spelling & Grammar:91.333333333333%
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    #1

    kt6550kt6550

    Superb. A very good portrait of an internal conflict.
    Commented 02/02/2011 20:28
    #2

    astarteastarte

    I agree. I definitely want to read more of this. Wonder what he'll choose in the end.
    Commented 02/02/2011 20:48
    #3

    DnavarreDnavarre

    You know, I'm not quite sure, either.
    Commented 02/02/2011 23:06
    #4

    Kerri-EmmittKerri-Emmitt

    Very good; captured me right from the off-set. Please contintue with this.

    We need a little 'conflicted romance' at the Den!!
    Commented 03/02/2011 23:12
    #5

    Invisible HeroineInvisible Heroine

    Wow that was awesome! I would love to read more! Great job!
    Commented 04/02/2011 02:57
    #6

    boneygboneyg

    Very good.

    More would be fantastic.
    Commented 04/02/2011 05:47