Fear

Poem written by flickeringfairy on Tuesday 1, February 2011

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Crash Boom Bang and mild PTSD

Overall Rating: 90%

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Fear It grips. I grip the dash. I could not bear another crash. The pain, The sound, The though of it. A great big weight on my shoulders sits. My mind, it races. My heart, it hits new faster paces. Tires squeal, Knuckles white, Will my family be alright? It isn't fair. It should be done. I cannot bear another one.
   

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    Interesting. A good capture of panic.