Boredom

Poem written by flickeringfairy on Sunday 23, January 2011

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In-school suspension in H.S.

Overall Rating: 87.6%

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Wandering thoughts in my head. Fearing that my mind is dead. Stripped of my sanity I'm waiting here to be set free. Free from this hell that I am in. I feel so trapped my patience is thin. I've lost myself my minds a waste, I need to fill this empty space. Being caught up in my dreams, I think I'm lost in reality.
   

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    Interesting.
    Brief - yet, evocative.

    Well done.