G'northack the dwarf of legend

Story written by Dnavarre on Sunday 16, January 2011

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Part 1: G'northack's words

Overall Rating: 89.466666666667%

This writing has been rated by 3 members, resulting in a rating of 89.466666666667% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:88.333333333333%
Imagery:89%
Spelling & Grammar:90%
Flow/Rhythm:90.333333333333%
Vocabulary:89.666666666667%
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    just needs to be cleaned up a little bit. There were a few lines in the begining that stuck out the most, just a tiny bit to tweak. But it looks like it is going to be a great story!Grin
    Glad you're back to writing. Good start.
    sighing......So much for the descendants of Gimli, Son of Gloin. Frown
    Nicely done.

    I found it very enjoyable, and am looking forward to chapter two.