The Moon Shines Softly

Description
A poem written with my wife in mind.This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 93.9% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
Concept/Plot: | 96.5% |
Imagery: | 94% |
Spelling & Grammar: | 93.5% |
Flow/Rhythm: | 92.5% |
Vocabulary: | 93% |
The moon shines softly on your skin
The stars your eyes adorn
Your midnight hair stirs in the wind
It glows so dark and warm
Like roses kissed by the dew
Are your lovely lips
And I love the taste of you
Honey from the comb that drips
Your body is a joy to me
A pleasure to my eyes
Your sensual curves I love to see
You make my passion rise
I long to feel you in my arms
So warm and soft and firm
To know and taste of your charms
Our love through touch affirmed
But more than skin and hair and eyes
And lips soft like a rose
More than sight and taste and touch
And your spicy scent that fills my nose
It is your heart that drew me then
And holds me ever true
Your beauty starts so deep within
And in every way shines through
And so I say I want you
From now to ever more
Your taste, your touch, your sight, your scent,
And your heart that I adore
-mmc ©9/28/10