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Critical Review written by Dnavarre on Tuesday 14, December 2010

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Chapter 1: Out for a Walk

Overall Rating: 92.85%

This writing has been rated by 4 members, resulting in a rating of 92.85% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:92.5%
Imagery:94%
Spelling & Grammar:92.75%
Flow/Rhythm:92.25%
Vocabulary:92.75%
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    Powerful.

    I get a 'Planet of the Apes' (the book) feel, to this.

    Excellently done.
    What a strange train of thought to produce this. That's jealousy speaking. Really good work.
    A very powerful and thought-provoking story. Are you going to add to it or just leave it as is?